Congratulations on your DD. I never would have thought listening to a seashell would bring out a poem like this.
It's well-written and imaginative beyond what I thought when I listened to a seashell. I only heard an echo of the sea and ghosts.
Maybe it ...sank into the whites of your [my] eyes like a shipwreck...
Mostly I hear the ghosts you wrote about and I'm glad to read about them. Thank you.